An ambitious sperm enters an unknown womb.
With flawless precision, Life unfolds.
A euphoric son learns to walk one step at a time.
A boy who never speaks keeps running all the while.
Compelling dreams that carry a childhood on it's wings.
A fire-breathing life without audience or applause begins.
There's anxious child sitting on the bedroom floor.
He's afraid of what lies tomorrow.
There's a boy down on his knees
behind a closed bathroom door. He weeps.
There's confined freedom and meaningless lore.
Innocence denied till it bleeds out of the pores.
A laughter learned to mask the pain inside.
A smile showcased to hide the secret shame
of being deprived.
There's the defeat of a sea fish caught in a net
that it can never breach.
There's a man who wants to know the meaning of life.
He's tired and older than his time.
There's a believer who's waiting for a sign.
A love that no one knows the reason why.
There's insidious insanity growing in bile.
There is distorted reality. Mirroring lies.
There's a stranger in the rain with his face to the skies.
A weary traveller standing in line waiting for a ride.
There's a glint that hides the fear in his eyes.
A soldier hesitates, unsure of his fight.
There's an unrelenting mind.
A soul that's restlessly still alive.
A body that decays in a six feet hole somewhere nearby.
These moments, trapped for eternity in black and white, will make an album of mine. I'll call it 'Life.'
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electric, thanks. ;-)
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hey mojo.. this is really one of your best pieces. loved it! mature without being overtly so.
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Gita!!! ha!!! So are still very much here. I was starting to wonder at your rather long absence if you have found some new passion in your life.. a new love!! ha..ha... If not, please do. It always widens your perspective and eniriches your life. But by no chance, leave us all. :-)) good to see you here. and yeah, abe and I, we never kind of agreed on much. As you can see. he..he...
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Dear Doc., Thank you. I am glad you feel that way. :-)
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Abrahim Lincoln once said,
And in the end, it's not the years in your life that count. It's the life in your years.
your perspective on life is also interesting, and more important, it is narrated beautiully.
Gita
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one of your best
madhvi
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Naval, it is always good to hear you speak your mind here. And yes, you are right. Life is our soul's journey from ignorance to knowledge. :-)
Thank you for stopping by. I appreciate it.
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To BigMojo
A body that decays in a six feet hole somewhere nearby..... I'll call it 'Life.': Yes, that's the hard fact. But our life is still somehting more than that. It is the rising of our soul from ignorance to knowledge, through the experiences we get on the journey.
You have narrated our life's journey in the most beautiful manner.
Naval Langa
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