Stabbed in the heart
by a deathless desire,
I'm not dead but
risen to life instead.
Your pr...
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Stabbed in the heart
by a deathless desire,
I'm not dead but
risen to life instead.
Your presence hurts
my ageing insides,
don't know
what else love is.
My pain is
my pleasure denied,
life is naught but
orgasmic breathlessness
in time.
I walk now
with a spring in my feet
I fly without wings
on your dreams.
I kiss your tiny little feet,
humbled by my own feeling,
with my tears I wash them clean
overcome by the guilt of dying.
You look at me as if I'm crazy
I disintegrate
into a million little smiles
You touch my cheeks gently
a shiver travels
through my body slowly,
starts an earthquake within me
wisdom fails to holds me still.
Do you see me bleed, it's real
can't hide the truth that I feel
if this is how all love stories begin
then let me love even if love is defeat.
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white wings, wah! mazza aah gaya! You have honored me with this wonderful translation :-)) Thank you so much. For both the time and effort. I appreciate it.
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meray dil main chaakoo lag giya
marnay ki koee kwahaish na thee
main maraa nahin
lakin nayee paidash lay baitha
jab tu maray pass hoti hai
to maeray andhar aag lag jaati hai
samajh nahin aata
mohabbat kyaa cheez hai
mera dukh tumari mohabbat ka
na milnay waala dukh hai
zindgi kyaa hai agar wakat main
zindgi k maza nahin hai
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sansmerci, love is surrender, yes. But not in the way most people understand and believe. :-)) love is pain, yes. But again, not as depravity but as delight of existence. :-) It is the pain of exaltation, which obviously, is not a normal state of existence for most of us.
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love is defeat love is surrender its hell its loss of peace of mind its torture its the other name for pain ... who cud live without the pain?
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Sampath, I accept. Though I cannot claim to understand. :-) Which, anyway, I believe is not necessary.
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dear bigmojo,
it is not so for me..
ilove many people
unconditiinally in the existantial plane....
Thanks...
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Sampath, I believe love starts from the spiritual plane and culminates in the physical. :-) That is why it is possible to love inspite of the responses in the physical world. :-)))) Though this is not a popular point of view. But it is men and women of rare awareness that are capable of loving in such a way. Others, that may include you and me, follow the physical to emotional to intellectual to spiritual route. :-))
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supriya, :-))
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dear Bigmojo, lovely expressions...
i liked the ending sentence ..
"then let me love even if love is defeat."
it takes courage to love and continue to love irrespective of the
responses and struggles...
needs convition , humanness and courage..
when all these are there is no defeat....
from physicality love moves to an existantial plane...
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Mojo :-))) aww... dats da sweetest thang you've said to me lately :-)
Thanks!
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