I'm drifting on a wave
walking by the sea
my mind keeps sailing
to a faraway beach.
The sands are golden
they've named it after me,
nymphs and mermaids
I see a feast of beauty.
King of the universe
I hear myself speak
give me a boat folks
I wish the world to see.
Time and tide wait
for none, so said, but me
I'm the master, eternity
a timeless soul indeed.
Trading places at will
a drop of water for real
the core of mighty ocean
a wave that devours cities.
I kiss them winds at night
they promise me the skies
in their arms, on the clouds
we tango wild for a while.
I'm brilliant white light
raining on street sides
laughing aloud insanely
destroying defunct species.
The fire torching trees
dead wood with weeds
I allow myself no pity
killing to create purity.
The world welcomes life
truth is man in all honesty.
I'm better stop this dream
for soon I'll die laughing.
Close
shivanjali, I must be a very learned man not to want to dream, yeah? LOL
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TOo dreamy...changing its course in the last three stanzas ...but probably the last stanza sums up it all...ur afraid to go on dreaming this dream...for a learned man like u u know the depth n truth why u don wanna continue dreaming like this...:))
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ajit, someone else too seemed to share that view here. :-)) I am afraid I'll be soon referred to as the 'last-line wonder!!!" LOL
glad to see you here. thanks for stopping by.
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ending was good........again..........
I really love the punch in your last lines...................very often
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electric, if you want to put it like that, well, I cannot deny that I exist in an 'altered' state of mind!!! he...he...
no comments on nicotine. not as long as i'm smoking! LOL
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you mean to say you're mind is already "altered" otherwise ?! ;-)
and nicotine alters your lungs and throat, my friend - forever... :(
good to see you back too :))
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electric, hah!!! preposterous, I say. I use no mind altering substance. Well, except nicotine. :-)) good to see you here.
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just how much "ganja" has gone into you to make you think you'll die laughing??!

I'm brilliant white light
raining on street sides
laughing aloud insanely
destroying defunct species.
The fire torching trees
dead wood with weeds
... some really good images!
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CB, shukriya janab! :-)
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har taraf tera hi jalwa... great imagery
thanks!
~CB
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