I Better Stop This Dream

  Jul 2 2008  | Views 274 |  Comments  (25)
Im drifting on a wave walking by the sea my mind keeps sailing to a faraway beach. The... Expand

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  BigMojo posted 1 month ago

shivanjali, I must be a very learned man not to want to dream, yeah? LOL



  shivanjali4u posted 1 month ago

TOo dreamy...changing its course in the last three stanzas ...but probably the last stanza sums up it all...ur afraid to go on dreaming this dream...for a learned man like u  u know the depth n truth why u don wanna continue dreaming like this...:))



  BigMojo posted 1 month ago

ajit, someone else too seemed to share that view here. :-)) I am afraid I'll be soon referred to as the 'last-line wonder!!!" LOL

glad to see you here. thanks for stopping by.



  ajitnambiar posted 1 month ago

ending was good........again..........
I really love the punch in your last lines...................very often



  BigMojo posted 1 month ago

electric, if you want to put it like that, well, I cannot deny that I exist in an 'altered' state of mind!!! he...he...

no comments on nicotine. not as long as i'm smoking! LOL



  electric wind posted 1 month ago

you mean to say you're mind is already  "altered" otherwise ?! ;-)

and nicotine alters your lungs and throat, my  friend - forever... :(

good to see you back too :))

 



  BigMojo posted 1 month ago

electric, hah!!! preposterous, I say. I use no mind altering substance. Well, except nicotine. :-)) good to see you here.



  electric wind posted 1 month ago

just how much "ganja" has gone into you to make you think you'll die laughing??!


I'm brilliant white light
raining on street sides
laughing aloud insanely
destroying defunct species.

The fire torching trees
dead wood with weeds

 
... some really good images! 



  BigMojo posted 1 month ago

CB, shukriya janab! :-)



  CaravanBpl posted 1 month ago

har taraf tera hi jalwa... great imagery

thanks!

~CB





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