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I Too Walked On Water Once

  Jul 7 2008  | Views 411 |  Comments  (42)
Once you were a whirlwind living inside my head, a wild river running over my flesh. Once... Expand

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  electric wind posted 4 mnths ago

beautiful... the content AND the expression... made me think of a song by toad-the-wet-sprocket (and i like it a lot!) ...

walk on the ocean
step on the stones
flesh becomes water
wood becomes bone
...
now we're back at the homestead
where the air makes you choke
and people dont know you
and trust is a joke
we don't even have pictures
just memories to hold
that grow sweeter each season
as we slowly grow old
...


:))



  BigMojo posted 4 mnths ago

electric, good evening, dear friend. most delighted to see you here tonight. :-)) ah... that lyrics sound more profound and rivetting than my attempt at poetry, I say. :-))


  electric wind posted 4 mnths ago

hmm... i love those lyrics myself... it wasn't meant as a "comparison", though! your words have an effect on people in a different way too... :))

always good to read you, my friend!

:))



  BigMojo posted 4 mnths ago

electric, good evening, dear friend. most delighted to see you here tonight. :-)) ah... that lyrics sound more profound and rivetting than my attempt at poetry, I say. :-))


  electric wind posted 4 mnths ago

hmm... i love those lyrics myself... it wasn't meant as a "comparison", though! your words have an effect on people in a different way too... :))

always good to read you, my friend!

:))


  electric wind posted 4 mnths ago

hmm... i love those lyrics myself... it wasn't meant as a "comparison", though! your words have an effect on people in a different way too... :))

always good to read you, my friend!

:))




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